Bloging about my blogs

I think I am pretty good at remebering to blog my work.  If I was to go back in time to re-do all my blog post I would re-write them and make them better.
To make them better I would write more words and make my sentense longer.
I think blogger is a very good app for me to write down about my work.

My groups game creation part two

Today me and Jade finished our slide and we were all working on some game ideas.

My groups game creation

Today my group completed most of our work on the slides.  We called our game twisting crime, we called it that because our first card said chose your own game so we chose twister and our commuity issues was crime.here is our link



Group: Jade,Eva and serita

My work part two

Plot-essay

Essay written by Serita

I am choosing the cemetery plot that is in the novel Trash.  I decided to chose the cemetery plot because I thought it would be the most important and interesting part of the story.  I think the plot that i'm doing is important because they needed to go to the cemetery so that can find Pita and the money.  They needed Pita so they could find out what grave to open. They figured out what grave it was because they saw Pita sitting up high, and then they found out that Pitas grave was empty witch eliminated her grave, then it clicked that found out the money was in the empty grave.

If that did not go to the cemetery it would change their live completely because they would not find out what grave to look in and they would not find Pita.  They would also be running around in circles. I think this plot is interesting because they have to be weary of what mite happen around them, and the boys had  to be like detectives so they could figure out the clues that lead to the money.

I think this part of the story  was worth choosing because I thought it had the mane part in it and also the most mysterious parts in it.  I did not like the part when they took a long time to find the money. I think the most important part of the story was when they all found the money, I liked it because it made me want to read some more of the story.  If I was to change one parts of the plot I would change the part when they find out what grave they have to look in, because in my own opinion it took way too long, I would make them find out what grave it is, but there would be nothing in there.

I would give this plot a 8.5/10 because I really enjoyed it, but some parts made me go to sleep.  

I definitely recommend reading this book. I love it.

Story written by Andy mulligan   Trash

my work for trash

This is my poem about my setting